Tuesday, April 8, 2014

Introductory Paragraph (Fate)

       "Heart is what drives us and determines our fate", once said Isabel Allende. This means that we do what we love and it'll be determined in our future. It states the truth for the fact that we do chose what we love to do. We don't just agree on something to do unless we like it. We never know how our results will end up and all we do is expect the unexpected. Fate Is clearly seen in the novel Gone by Michael Grant. They're willing to do what seems to be right so maybe in the future the results that they want will determine in what they are doing at the moment. Sam in this novel doesn't know what his and the rest of the peoples fate is since every person over the age of 15 vanished, he has to figure out where they are, and what to do to survive with the others.

2 comments:

  1. Put quotations around the quote. Instead of "chose" you should have used "choose".

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  2. This is good just remember to add quotations to you're quote. You did a good job of not using I, but "we" was constantly used.

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